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Old 08-05-2009, 12:45 PM   #76
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Can't believe I've never posted in here. I used to write poetry all the time. I should get back on it.

My most recent is probably two years old.


Explosions

Too good to care
make your plans and keep them
Destroy the thought of freedom
A push, a shove, ignored
Let the flame of fear ignite.


Watch it explode
begin to implode
the whole of itself exhumed
Feel it erode
A soul on its own
In a plan of destruction sold.


Scratch out the truth
rewrite the words
continue to spread
a sense of fear
A fear that controls
the minds of the naive.


Scramble our thoughts
you're too blind to see
the devastation and shame
you have put on our lives.



nice job!

and since i'm here
another lol

Seven Years

Seven years
No more tears
Seven years
Release my fears
Why did you never show
When you know I desperately needed you so
Don't you call yourself a man
Someone else was holding my hand
Multitude of things to prove
It's up to you to make the move
No longer bitter just saddened it's true
Cause I never meant a thing to you
So wherever you are I hope you burn
You had your fun now it's my turn.

~~~~~~~~~~~~
the fury of a woman scorned

bye now
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Old 11-05-2009, 11:09 PM   #77
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I like the simplicity and loose structure. It brings across the relaxed, introspective, dreamy feeling of lying on the grass.
Thanks! It's sort of what it is, and most of my poems are introspective, and usually "happen" at a certain place. You know, listen to Nine Inch Nails more depressing songs and you'll sort of get it.

Here's another one from my tumblr:

It always gets darker

Sometimes I wonder,
With rage and thunder
If the universe is right,
and lifeís a constant fight
I want to tear a big hole,
In my chest and my soul
But I knew it all the time,
and Iím just wasting my time
Itís pointless, this screaming,
when itís nothing but dreaming
And although I keep kicking,
the time is still ticking,
And I wonder when it will be,
that I can stop kicking to be free


and..

Revenge/Reward


Head in knees
Dirt under my nails
The wrong succeed
When all else fails
I lay hurled
Youíll pay the price
An escaping world
Iím breathing ice
You will hear
And you will see
Pain and fear
Will set you free
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Old 14-05-2009, 12:37 AM   #78
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Gloom of Night

In restless veins there floats a dream
a missing link - a torn up seam
The thread that kept these thoughts apart
has broken up with will to start

I once knew love - as living man
The kiss of heart - the touch of hand
It starts as rough as it will end
I need the key to share - my friend

In whispers I see gloom of night
In hidden shadows - hidden sight
The urge to feel - to ease the pain
The need to love returned again

In restless veins there floats a dream
a missing link - a torn up seam
In twisted motions kept from sight
I'm not lonesome of this night
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Old 14-05-2009, 02:02 AM   #79
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Humble Distortions

I have seen my name in the sand
Washed away by the sea
The raven is colored by autumn
Disgusted by pieces of me

I opened the door to your laughter
Yet you were nowhere there to be found
I fall and crush to the pavement
Pieces are left on the ground

Humble distortions are fading
'Cause my name is gone with the sea
The raven colored the atumn
Inspired by pieces of me
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Old 14-05-2009, 02:03 AM   #80
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Leave me be

I fear
the treasure
is hidden too deep
this time

My haven has
lost its magic
and hope seems
hopeless

Maybe these
mornings
where ment for
mourning
mending with the
broken memories
of the night

It's not okay
anymore
to see the ignorance
and still don't
let go

and I have
hoped
for too long -
it's not in me
that these
empty conversations
get filled with
empty
words

So kill me
and leave me be -
shed the spawn
the life
whom was never granted

Leave me be
and I will eat your misery
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Old 14-05-2009, 02:04 AM   #81
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Picture Perfect

Too broken to remain
Have no will - I can't sustain
Too lonely to give in
a soundless tear rolls down my chin

Too naked to conceal
is it dream or is it real?
Too left alone to see
never meant for it to be

Feeding from desire
I force you into open fire
Shattered tears fall to the ground
I cannot live - forever bound
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Old 14-05-2009, 02:10 AM   #82
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Instead of posting new threads for each poem, why don't you post them all in the poetry thread?
http://board.muse.mu/showthread.php?t=57926
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Old 14-05-2009, 08:42 AM   #83
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I like this one a lot.
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Old 14-05-2009, 01:47 PM   #84
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I like this one a lot.
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Old 14-05-2009, 01:48 PM   #85
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Instead of posting new threads for each poem, why don't you post them all in the poetry thread?
http://board.muse.mu/showthread.php?t=57926
Oh, I didn't know I could.
Will do that the next time, thanks
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Old 14-05-2009, 10:22 PM   #86
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Hey MarenKinnear, just merged your threads with this one to keep all the poetry in one place
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Old 23-05-2009, 06:26 PM   #87
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Blood.
The pitter-patter of droplets falling to the floor.
I did this.
I killed her.
With one word.
One terrible word.

Feeling.
The terrible curse.
Emotions twist inside me.
Their bodies unravelling inside mine.
It hurts too much.
I close.
A cold hard shell.

Lost.
Thereís nothing left.
Nothing to say
Nothing to feel
Nothing to feel.
Sheís gone.


I cannot see through tear-rimmed eyes.
The pitter-patter of droplets falling to the floor.
You did this.
You killed me.
With one word.
One terrible word.




It seems to work better with the word 'her.' The formatting's a bit sucky, but basically the second bit is written by the woman the man 'kills.'
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Old 02-06-2009, 12:26 AM   #88
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We are all to blame... the agony and the shame
Everything we do is in vein... can you feel the pain

Regress into your fantasy... avoid the truth
Escape this broken dream... escape your broken dream

This i dedicate to the void... an untitled to the nu-named
This i dedicate to the world... to the world of the unknown

Suppress reality... suppress our fear

...An untitled for the un-named
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Old 22-07-2009, 03:48 AM   #89
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My imaginary friend, I ask for recognition,
you offer no reply.
It's just me here, fighting in the dark
biting to be free.
"It's time to go back in again" I say
and then I go back in.
The lie that I have built around you
is tied up now with many things.
I must learn to lose the lie and find my empty space again.
I will live a better life I know I have no other choice.
My imaginary friend
you had many times to speak
many times to show your favour but you never did
not for me, not now, not ever, goodbye.
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Old 25-07-2009, 11:06 PM   #90
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It's lovely, but it also contains effort, so I probably won't try it.
It looks great though, genuinely. It makes it look like a love-letter that someone's tried to keep safe despire efforts to destroy it. That said, maybe it ought to look a bit more crumpled? I hesistate to say that cos I don't want to ruin it.
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