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Old 01-03-2013, 01:17 PM   #732
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Awesome! I love the sound of the 8-bit dubstep drop in the second and third choruses here.

If I have one bit of criticism though, it's that I don't think you should directly replicate the length of time Matt holds his voice in the synth. It sounds like it's actually cutting out 'by mistake' often; probably keep them held down for longer.


Anyway, I was experimenting with this... from 1 to 5 AM, a miniature 16-bar cover of Unsustainable, the part directly after the first chorus:


(Here's a direct link, since for some reason the embedded version isn't showing up over here): https://soundcloud.com/rayfan9876-ab...e-cover-wip-16

This is only an experiment, so it isn't perfect yet or anything at all, but I'm enjoying the result so far.

EDIT:

Through the advice of Sippe, I decided to add some vocals:


http://soundcloud.com/rayfan9876-abs...cover-wip-16-1
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