The Poetry/Stories Thread

[ScarredEyes]

This will probably fail spectularly, but it'll be interesting to see the results if it doesn't. I'll have a go at a short one to start with.

See all the colours, reflected in water
Cousin Butterfly and Uncle Rainbow
Just like summers in paradise
Dreams comes true once more.

That's as much as I can feasibly think of for now, it was bit influenced by the track I'm listening to at the moment.

[New Born Lee]

ive went down when I fell i fell so fast
dropping like the panes in an hourglass-

wait, i better turn the foos off first! :LOL:

[ScarredEyes]

ive went down when I fell i fell so fast
dropping like the panes in an hourglass-

wait, i better turn the foos off first! :LOL:
Music in the background might actually help this, though Grohl yelping and grunting perhaps not.

[New Born Lee]

Okay.

A mounting chasm
There's not one spasm in his mind right now
Between him and true destiny there is one light
One light which blinds all else but leads him on and on
Like a tightrope he could fall and lose everything
His pride, his dignity, all he values.
But now, the moment of truth.
He rises upwards, plunging his sword into the air
As the monster quietens and falls to the ground
The warrior is not satisfied.
And full of adrenaline.
He starts off to adventures new.

(music: Requiem for a Dream, Clint Mansell Remix for LOTR)

[ScarredEyes]

Okay.

A mounting chasm
There's not one spasm in his mind right now
Between him and true destiny there is one light
One light which blinds all else but leads him on and on
Like a tightrope he could fall and lose everything
His pride, his dignity, all he values.
But now, the moment of truth.
He rises upwards, plunging his sword into the air
As the monster quietens and falls to the ground
The warrior is not satisfied.
And full of adrenaline.
He starts off to adventures new.

(music: Requiem for a Dream, Clint Mansell Remix for LOTR)
I like this, it's epic within one verse.

[ScarredEyes]

Just like a snowdrop falling
It's precious and fragile
Winter is calling
And forever makes me smile.

When the sun comes
Just hide yourself away
Watch the foxes run
Into the bright new day.

Music - Siberia by Charlotte Hatherley.

[New Born Lee]

I like this, it's epic within one verse.

Yeah its amazing what you can do simply on train of thought. I'll stick this on my thread. :happy:

[ScarredEyes]

Yeah its amazing what you can do simply on train of thought. I'll stick this on my thread. :happy:
And the music actually really does help, it can change one's outlook and therefore their verse in the click of a finger.

Also, I've added you as a friend on LJ, hope that's OK.

[New Born Lee]

Just like a snowdrop falling
It's precious and fragile
Winter is calling
And forever makes me smile.

When the sun comes
Just hide yourself away
Watch the foxes run
Into the bright new day.

Music - Siberia by Charlotte Hatherley.

Aww, I'm thinking of lots of little hibernating animals now. :happy:

And the music actually really does help, it can change one's outlook and therefore their verse in the click of a finger.

Also, I've added you as a friend on LJ, hope that's OK.

That's cool, I only just made it today. :)

[ScarredEyes]

Aww, I'm thinking of lots of little hibernating animals now. :happy:



That's cool, I only just made it today. :)
I only made mine properly today, you're my fourth friend on there, I look forward to future bloggings.

[New Born Lee]

I've just noticed.

I repeated the words "One light"

Now what film score was I listening to? :LOL:

/doh!

[ScarredEyes]

I've just noticed.

I repeated the words "One light"

Now what film score was I listening to? :LOL:

/doh!
Haha, it worked well in the poem though.

[ScarredEyes]

Tripping over wires
These limbs are flailing
My will is tired
My will is failing

She'll never forget
The night we met
But now I'm falling
And life is stalling.

(Charlotte Hatherley - Dawn Treader)

[Mausengeist]

It's funny how the strangest things
Come back at'cha in the end,
The candy floss and the scaffolding
Held up as my only friends

Labyrinths are cakewalks
And straight lines are living hells,
Myriad by myriad
I'm falling, climbing wells

...*rolls next joint*

[Elzapan]

Whats up paper cut?
What the fuck paper truck?
I dunno, paper bow.
What the hell? Christmas bell!


Cant remember the rest but it was a conversation me and my friend were having earlier

[That Little Animal]

Harm's cattle roams what lies beneath
Below black, below blue
Like doom-soaked earth gnomes do
Pulled down by sugar-rotten teeth

Care's flock floats up above
Over orange, over opal
As a joy-flushed fairies' ball
Its buoyancy the devil's love


:LOL: That came uot of nowhere, thank God I'm not a poet.
(listening to iTunes shuffling between Nirvana and the Amelie soundtrack)

[ScarredEyes]

Harm's cattle roams what lies beneath
Below black, below blue
Like doom-soaked earth gnomes do
Pulled down by sugar-rotten teeth

Care's flock floats up above
Over orange, over opal
As a joy-flushed fairies' ball
Its buoyancy the devil's love


:LOL: That came uot of nowhere, thank God I'm not a poet.
(listening to iTunes shuffling between Nirvana and the Amelie soundtrack)
Sounds a bit like Dylan Thomas, I like this.

[stuffitv3]

Sitting on the ground
Just fumbling around
Wasting away my time
Write down a little rhyme

Thinking of a girl so fine
Elated that she is mine
This weight feels as heavy as a rock
But it's only a ticking clock

Yah it needs to be spring break already.

[New Born Lee]

Heavy sacks,
My brain can't track
Nor fingers clack.
To my sack I pack
Would be the wisest tact.

[Tokamak]

So far people never see
the way they care
about how they don't
and yet they won't
because they simply
don't.

[Mausengeist]

Bellbottoms blueberries
All dusted with ice,
Flinging down the fetters
To the chocolate mice :stunned:

[WutDaFucksy]

Why did you leave?
Where did you go?
Sorry to hear,
I was a little slow...

But now you've gone,
Never to come back.
And im all alone,
On the beaten track...

:stunned:

[Mausengeist]

On the cadence of your every word,
I watch and wait
And sharpen the talons you gave me.
Something redder than the sunset
Shall spill from the skies tonight...

[New Born Lee]

A crashing lightning bolt as a painter works feverishly
As the shadows walk around him he glances upwards
His paling face, his whiting head, eyes wide and staring
It is almost as if something stalks his house, invisible.

His painting, only visible by the moonlight, is beautiful
A crippled smile of pride enlightens his face.
They said it would never come to anything.
Happy he was wrong, he retired.

The sneaking shadow ripples like the pipes of an organ
White fingers clasping the edge of the painting
And licking it away into the night
The door shuts with a slight jingle.

His age knows no bounds now, his skin has sunk so low
So wizened by the ages, none can bare this blow
Perhaps the gallery has written his name
Alas, breaking heart, no.

The ghostly man glitters, his eyes like his sacks
A cry of no again,
Screams and burning
The painter dies with his work.

[Artarita]

You could of been number one...
You could of had so much fun....
:LOL:nah I'm kidding....umm...


I paid a pickle
a nickle
he was so fickle
that he wasted away

so thus I got my nickle back.

[Caro]

If poetry is an artform
Then why does it feel like
Someone has cut all the bristles
Off of my paintbrush
And slashed my canvas?

If words can paint a picture
Then why did someone stop talking
For long enough
To invent the camera?

Isn't art all in the eye of the beholder?
And isn't form all just a question
Of viewer or reader
Interpretation?

Or perhaps I'm just not so good
With words.

[Vesper]

I wrote this one off the top of my head with the magnet poetry on my fridge....

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b41/MissScarletKisses/IMG_1627.jpg

[ScarredEyes]

I wrote this one off the top of my head with the magnet poetry on my fridge....

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b41/MissScarletKisses/IMG_1627.jpg
This one is fantastic. It's got assonance and rhythm and some really nice alliteration, like screaming symphony.

[ScarredEyes]

Slowboats on the river
No course to follow
No dreams to pursue
Just travelling the endless waters
Looking for someone who knows their name.

(Music - Radiohead - How To Disappear Completely)

[Vesper]

This one is fantastic. It's got assonance and rhythm and some really nice alliteration, like screaming symphony.

thank ya!:happy:
At first I was trying to write something that I had already thought of but got frustrated because of the lack of certain words, so i just randomly plucked words out at thats what I ended up with. I must've looked like freak standing in front of my fridge for a good 10 mins.

[museaddict16]

If poetry is an artform
Then why does it feel like
Someone has cut all the bristles
Off of my paintbrush
And slashed my canvas?

If words can paint a picture
Then why did someone stop talking
For long enough
To invent the camera?

Isn't art all in the eye of the beholder?
And isn't form all just a question
Of viewer or reader
Interpretation?

Or perhaps I'm just not so good
With words.
Awesome! :D

This one is fantastic. It's got assonance and rhythm and some really nice alliteration, like screaming symphony.

+1 Agreed! :)


Okay...i'll give it a go...

Like the angels you were watching me,
But you've been gone for oh so long.
Like the brightest stars in my nighttime sky,
You have never led me wrong.

But now the clouds have come and covered you,
Leaving me to fend for my own;
I wander aimlessly about this world,
Knowing i am now alone.

You left me to my own emotions
With nowhere left to run.
I'm drowing in my own dark oceans;
I have now become undone.


Not the best, but still okay....

[Tokamak]

Life is not about who stands or falls,
It's about who sucks the monkey balls.



Sorry just shot into me.

[New Born Lee]

The light a simple glint
Is enough to make my heart squint
And crush itself.

Why do you shine so strongly?
That my chest starts moaning softly
To crush itself.

I could forget about you
But my heart believes it's true
I crush myself.

[Ross]

I am distance defined
awkward but helpful
consoling and hurtful
worrying but reassuring

as far and
as long as
the eye can see
but only ever
a child's step from your
loving arms

[Carrotie]

There's no chance in hell that this is going to rhyme, but here goes: (I'm listening to Hyper Chondriac Music at the moment so it might be a little sad :p)

The piano keys are covered in dust
The guitar strings are all broken
And all around there is nothing but this deafening
Silence

[Murray]

My dick is full of cider
My dick is full of brie
My dick is full of chocolate eggs
There's lots for you and me

Hamper penis
They all did cry
Hamper penis
I stuck it in their eye

[New Born Lee]

My dick is full of cider
My dick is full of brie
My dick is full of chocolate eggs
There's lots for you and me



Yeats came back from the dead and took happy pills! :D
Serious props.

[Ross]

Shaking and rattling your petty
little box of false hope and broken dreams.
Lie, cheat and steal, twist and contort
until any truth is lost in the roar
of that petty little box.

Intellectually inept, indecisive,
incapable, intrinsic flaws veiled
by eloquent rhetoric.
Rarely heard, extending towards
our repetitive ideas, constantly.

[That Little Animal]

A poem fell
From the top of my head
It's not looking well
I think it's dead.

[ScarredEyes]

Dope-filled
Underskilled
Never learning
Always turning
Into death
Without a breath
Take these hands
Across new lands.

[pubicmage]

drone! drone! drone!
drone! drone!
drone!
drone! drone! drone! drone!
viola! glissando
Conrad!
Zappi (Zappa) Faust

I am Allen Ginsberg.

[WutDaFucksy]

Hair Hair Hair Hair.

[colonparenthesis]

Postman Pat,
Postman Pat,
Postman Pat,
And his black and white cat.

[New Born Lee]

My darling
Spin around with me
In a glorious Katamari
It would truly be my dream.

[Ritos Faar]

Hahahahaha... Okay.

Fire in the eyes
Unwanted pesticide?
Kills all the weeds
Choking all your dreams

The narrow cut
Wound would not shut
Bleed in the dirt
Lie down, you're hurt

Smash off the neck
The body's a wreck
Whipping steel;
Your eyes, I feel

Unexplainable dark
Don't run too far
The darkness hides
A darker side

And in the gloom,
The deathly moon
Hangs overhead
One quick mistake and then you're-

Was listening to Deadwing by Porcupine Tree. It seems that this fits in the breathy, almost rappy bit - most of the time. Aaaanyways.

[rainbower]

i wrote this when i was 13 :) 6 years ago :)




Times are running and staying with us,
Times are making us cry..
Come to me, we will live into my dreams,
Come to me, we won’t die..

There is no crime on your beautiful face,
There is no death in your eyes..
I’m dancing in sorrowful, innocent dreams,
I wish that you’ll come with sunrise..

Dreams had been changing the romantic sky,
Dreams now are colored with blue,
I’m thinking about the end of the life,
I’m still thinking about you..

Times are running and staying with us,
Times are always grim!
Stay with me, we won’t die in love,
Stay with me, we’ll live in dream...

[New Born Lee]

Liquid rust from your leaking heart
Oozing from your lips
Onto palest skin and softest neck
You're as dead as they come

The zombie comes alive and blinks
After feeling the flash of light
I turn the snipe, and then my wife
Beholds my strangest dream

Pale is wiped to life-filled cream
She wonders as she looks at me
How death in my much darker scene
Could be seen and called 'beauty'.

[Ritos Faar]

Little Piece Of Heaven much? =p

[*~SugarSnow~*]

Oh shag. Didn't realise there was an arty poem place here... I've gone and posted my Muse poem in Other Muse Topics...
GO READ :D

[Pop-a-pea]

Its not off the top of my head but I found this one in my files so i thought id post it :D

Once upon a time I walked down a rocky road,
That simply made all my happiness just corrode,
I wandered down dark paths all the time,
Which left me with nothing that I could call mine.

I stumbled into a dream of all dreams,
That held happiness and no more screams.
It made me want to live once more,
As I opened and stepped through this new door.

I could breathe, I could dance,
I was given a second chance.
I could sing, I could shout,
And not get hurt for what came out of my mouth.

This story began with a once upon a time,
And I told it in the simplest of rhyme,
It even has a happily ever after,
Which allows me to enjoy life and much more laughter.

[Winged_burrito]

in the autumn,
when it rains,
i go outside,
dance between te drops.

i put out my hands,
to stop the rain,
to stop it from falling,
falling down and die.

when it rains,
i go outside,
and catch the rain,
to stop my life from going down

tadah?
It's not that good, I know, but usually I write in Dutch xD

[stuffitv3]

Blown away,
shot away,
just fucking throw me away.

Here today
gone today
What the hell is today?

Why do I stay?
Why do you stay?
How do we stay?

Over here
Yonder there
Everywhere

Life's a treat
A shit treat
It's been a treat.

[nonoor]

Yellow light,
blinking bright,
square shaped box,
buzzing with might.

You gave me hell,
a few days ago,
now everything is well,
yet you seem low.

I knock your top,
I hit your side,
and all I get,
is a little Hi?

I was looking at my speakers.
:D

[New Born Lee]

Liquid rust from your leaking heart
Oozing from your lips
Onto palest skin and softest neck
You're as dead as they come

The zombie comes alive and blinks
After feeling the flash of light
I turn the snipe, and then my wife
Beholds my strangest dream

Pale is wiped to life-filled cream
She wonders as she looks at me
How death in my much darker scene
Could be seen and called 'beauty'.

Little Piece Of Heaven much? =p

Just looked up the lyrics and a bit of info on that song.

My poem is similar, but it's not about directly killing for love. It's about a man who enjoys taking pictures of her wife as she pretends to be dead. :)

Yeah I have weird ideas. :D

[New Born Lee]

Yellow light,
blinking bright,
square shaped box,
buzzing with might.

You gave me hell,
a few days ago,
now everything is well,
yet you seem low.

I knock your top,
I hit your side,
and all I get,
is a little Hi?

I was looking at my speakers.
:D

I love this, especially the last stanza! :D

[ScarredEyes]

I've got so much time
To see things glow;
Yet, so far to go
Yet, I'm not quite there.

Taste the sun
Like golden rain
Alone, in space
Alone, no home.

[New Born Lee]

Confessions of a Concept

Willkommen prized past
Bienvenida stolen charm
This welcome belongs to someone else

[nonoor]

I love this, especially the last stanza! :D

Hehehe, thank you :)

[nonoor]

I feel the need,
to go to you,
to tell you things,
you never knew.

Ask you questions,
seek the truth,
oh, why were you,
so untrue.

I tried to speak,
but I had no voice,
inside I was screaming,
because I had no choice.

I'm not a child,
don't think I am stupid,
you've caused enough misery,
so just speak the truth.

I wait for the day,
I gain enough courage,
but till that day,
I wait in vain.
I wait in pain.

[Fernando]

Ballad of a Shattered Soul
Part I

i tried to find
some peace of mind
but instead
i found you
now my head
has gone to war
reason against
what i adore
the war drums
thumping
day and night
for great stakes
they fight
and fight
until at last
the firing ceased
and two powers
became as one

[emilya]

Cold pasta
No microwave
The nomad
Is foiled again.

[Problemfanatique]

Snowflakes falling, like shedded tears..
melting in oil, the colours merging, mixed with our fears,
we took advantage, we were too blind to see
now its deteriating before our glazed eyes, we let this be.

We were foolish to think It would last forever,
we were all too hyped to believe, the earth beneath us tremors
The invisible leaves float away from bare trees, that barely stand,
Too much oxygen being consumed, it was too crammed.

You can't turn back time, it can't be erased.
flooded fields in all their glory, are you proud of what you've made?
There was never a chance of surviving, we all slipped away,
We let it happen, we all saw it coming, we all saw the day.

[emilya]

My heart
does not fit with yours
Two pieces
destined not to work
Just like
My new vacuum cleaner
I had to
Take it back to the shop
Can I
Have a refund?

[Problemfanatique]

My heart
does not fit with yours
Two pieces
destined not to work
Just like
My new vacuum cleaner
I had to
Take it back to the shop
Can I
Have a refund?

Lmao, I love your poems XD

[Ritos Faar]

The VCR broke yesterday
But that's okay, that's okay
I'll buy something new and better made
'Cause it's okay, it's okay

And the light in my room flickers at night
Things out of sight, thank god out of sight
But I switch it off anyway, so that's alright
Things out of sight, thank god out of sight

This morning I find messages on the walls
And screwed paper balls, screwed paper balls
This morning I found I can't speak at all
And screwed paper balls, screwed paper balls

With the television snowing and the radio dead
Messing with my head, messing with my head
The newspapers arrived, but they're all blank instead
Messing with my head, messing with my head

And the music still plays, thundering on
And the job still pays, even though it's a con
And the wind still blows through the naked trees
The only problem here is the voice inside me

[New Born Lee]

Florescent colours and daring mothers,
Magic spells and shooting stars,
Camera angles and power bangles,
Clashing blades and two-page spars.

Women stubborn but quickly feeble,
Men are shocked and easy to play,
Arrogant boys with pets and toys,
Ignoring plights of light and day.

Naked scenes or sex machines,
Flecked with blood with written song,
Eastern novels aim to please,
Read it right and you won't go wrong.

[Fernando]

a poem written off of the top of the head
the dome of thought
from which all conscious thought stems
where to rhyme and where to make
words in the line alliterate
the choice is yours
i do believe
will you stumnble or succeed?

[WutDaFucksy]

My Dinner

I had meat,
I had peas,
I had carrots,
I had cheese.

It was yum
It was great
I completely
Cleaned my plate.

[New Born Lee]

My Dinner

I had meat,
I had peas,
I had carrots,
I had cheese.

It was yum
It was great
I completely
Cleaned my plate.

I just love uncomplicated stuff like this! Why do I even try?

[Fernando]

I just love uncomplicated stuff like this! Why do I even try?
Beats me. I find that not trying pretty much always works better. The sooner you admit that your subconscious mind is superior in pretty much every way to the conscious mind, the better.

[New Born Lee]

Beats me. I find that not trying pretty much always works better. The sooner you admit that your subconscious mind is superior in pretty much every way to the conscious mind, the better.

Yeah, I always write my best stuff without thinking...

[emilya]

My eyes are hurting
From staring at the screen
Can I photoshop myself
A new pair of retinas?

[Mneme]

Florescent colours and daring mothers,
Magic spells and shooting stars,
Camera angles and power bangles,
Clashing blades and two-page spars.

Women stubborn but quickly feeble,
Men are shocked and easy to play,
Arrogant boys with pets and toys,
Ignoring plights of light and day.

Naked scenes or sex machines,
Flecked with blood with written song,
Eastern novels aim to please,
Read it right and you won't go wrong.

<3

Got a nice flow to it...

[New Born Lee]

<3

Got a nice flow to it...

Thank yah!

[Mneme]

A crashing lightning bolt as a painter works feverishly
As the shadows walk around him he glances upwards
His paling face, his whiting head, eyes wide and staring
It is almost as if something stalks his house, invisible.

His painting, only visible by the moonlight, is beautiful
A crippled smile of pride enlightens his face.
They said it would never come to anything.
Happy he was wrong, he retired.

The sneaking shadow ripples like the pipes of an organ
White fingers clasping the edge of the painting
And licking it away into the night
The door shuts with a slight jingle.

His age knows no bounds now, his skin has sunk so low
So wizened by the ages, none can bare this blow
Perhaps the gallery has written his name
Alas, breaking heart, no.

The ghostly man glitters, his eyes like his sacks
A cry of no again,
Screams and burning
The painter dies with his work.

Also quite good...I'm gonna have to read this thread through! :D

[Nimpo46]

I'm not a poet
And i know it.

[New Born Lee]

I'm not a poet
And i know it.

Nobel prize and 5 grammys and stuff, sir!

[Fernando]

imagine there's no seven
it's easy if you try
no well below us
above us only pie

imagine your life sober
it isn't as much fun...

[Ritos Faar]

Furry furry candy sticks!
Furry furry chocs!
If you eat them you'll be sicks!
And then I'll have to pl0x.

[New Born Lee]

I need no angels, only the strange,
The ones with jolts and faults.
For some to laugh at or points of chat,
Their actors- sweetest salt.

Pavements paved with pavement,
Pale cheeks paled with paleness.
You're young, you're whole, your praise I've sung,
You're life as life should be.

[ChasingDreams]

Turn the withered pages back
Rotting remnants of your soul
Seeping through the cracks and gaps
Burning through, like coal

Slanted writing lines the page
Meanings slurred and blurred
Memories clasped shut in a cage
Stored away from your mind

Did your had flow through the page
And write it all down?
So why, why is it so hard to remember
Why do you sit and frown?

[ninja]

Through all the loves i've felt and lost,
You are the one who will be missed the most.
I never thought in all these years,
there was anybody as perfect as you, my dear.

This bundle of love is what i fend,
I cherish it so, I hope it never ends.
I hope you'll find these words touch your heart,
however blunt, however sharp.

thats all :LOL:

[uka]

today it is sunny
I feel a bit funny
my feet are quite sweaty
I ate some spaghetti

well it was tagliatelli
but that didn't rhyme very well-y :erm:

*badoom tssss*

[bellamy'szetagirl]

When i spoke to you today, you turned your head and looked away. Did you not notice me there or even care. Why do you destroy my only hope to be free? Dont you know how much you mean to me? I guess not. :rolleyes:

[Strawberry_Juice]

I see this thread and I think a bit,
"Well it'd be fun to just write and sit!"
So here I am sitting on my bum,
Wearing pants, of course (it's a rule of thumb).
I tap my fingers with vigor and glee
On the keyboard, making such words as "pee"
And "flee" and "spree" and "bourgeoisie"-
Churning out words like busy lil' bee.

But now this game has lost its fun.
It's already past 9:41!
I should be tightly tucked in bed,
Sheet o'er feet, and pillow 'neath head.
Thus, I bid goodnight to all-
The mean, the kind, the big and small.
I hope to see you in my dreams
With Diana Ross and the Supremes.

[Ullalume]

Fuck YOU
Fuck ME
Fuck LIFE
Fuck PEACE

hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.....i'm in a good mood!

[Carrotie]

today it is sunny
I feel a bit funny
my feet are quite sweaty
I ate some spaghetti


:eek: What brilliance! *bows down to uka*

[New Born Lee]

Fuck YOU
Fuck ME
Fuck LIFE
Fuck PEACE

hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.....i'm in a good mood!

*sends off to Slipknot*

Oh, quick reply. Ah, they're suing you for copyright infringement...

[Ullalume]

*sends off to Slipknot*

Oh, quick reply. Ah, they're suing you for copyright infringement...

shit!

[New Born Lee]

shit!

You're on two cases now. You better stop swearing in this thread, lol.

[bellamy'szetagirl]

I want to write a cheezy poem about Muse...ok
There is a band named Muse
Who is made up of three talented dudes.
Matt the singer is smart and cute
And can play guitar and piano to boot.
The drummer Dom likes to talk and be seen
So he wears trousers of bright green.
Chris concentrates and plays the bass
With a smile that lights up his face.
They played lots of gigs for many years
Where we sang along, dance and cheered.
They are making their dreams come true
And mean so much to me and you.
Across the land their songs are now heard
They deserve to rule the world.
:$ :p

[Liz0_o]

i see the little children with there cheap lollysticks
because george bush is a real dick
hes made all the babys mamas poor
all because he likes war
but thats not all he wishes to gain
he wants to make you feel the pain
oil is the evil of the world
but who am i just a little girl



................:stunned:
i thinks it pretty dame good:LOL:

Edit: i've edited it like 3 times already

[Emaaa]

There once was a cat
it was quite fat
it ate all day
and i must say
it had a rather cool hat

[Lynzi]

I'd better go sleep soon cos even the moon
has gone to australia and the sun is out
birds r chirping and its light out
yet my eyes are wide wide open
I cant sleep, I'm not tired
I wish people would
stop telling me
to go to bed
I cant sleep
insomnia
is a bitch

:rolleyes:

[Megglen]

:eek: I can't think of a poem.... All I can think of it:

"Oh My God, I know to well, being sweet just doesn't count, if you've got better things to do"

Meh! Still sounds good :D

[New Born Lee]

Let's go kill the president!
Let's go kill the president!
Let's go kill the president!
Cos we are mad as fuck, oh!

Let's go kill the high school bully, NO!
Let's go kill the high school!
Let's go kill the high school bully!
And all his mates as well, oh!

We weren't given a purpose here!
We were just made to fight!
Let's go kill the evidence!
OF EVERYTHING THAT'S RIGHT!

(it goes on...)

[nonoor]

Let's go kill the president!
Let's go kill the president!
Let's go kill the president!
Cos we are mad as fuck, oh!

Let's go kill the high school bully, NO!
Let's go kill the high school!
Let's go kill the high school bully!
And all his mates as well, oh!

We weren't given a purpose here!
We were just made to fight!
Let's go kill the evidence!
OF EVERYTHING THAT'S RIGHT!

(it goes on...)

Let's go kill the lizard people!
Let's go kill the lizard people!
Let's go kill the fucking lizard people!
Cos they fucked up our lives, oh!

Let's go eat that neighbour!
Let's go eat that neighbour!
Let's go eat that neighbour!
And hack his vicious dogs, oh!

I don't know what my purpose is!
All I do is fight!
Life is filled with sticks and stones,
crushing the life in my bones!


Yours owns mine, tho.

[New Born Lee]

Let's go kill the lizard people!
Let's go kill the lizard people!
Let's go kill the fucking lizard people!
Cos they fucked up our lives, oh!

Let's go eat that neighbour!
Let's go eat that neighbour!
Let's go eat that neighbour!
And hack his vicious dogs, oh!

I don't know what my purpose is!
All I do is fight!
Life is filled with sticks and stones,
crushing the life in my bones!


Yours owns mine, tho.

Ah, yours is good enough! Tis a very customisable format I see, yes indeed!.
I can see that when I release it and it becomes a hit, it will be covered many times!

[nonoor]

Ah, yours is good enough! Tis a very customisable format I see, yes indeed!.
I can see that when I release it and it becomes a hit, it will be covered many times!

Aye.
:LOL:

[New Born Lee]

Aye.
:LOL:

But...but I'm a rock star...

[nonoor]

But...but I'm a rock star...

Yes you are!

[New Born Lee]

Yes you are!

YAY!
Watch out for my next singles, "Happy Crunchy Monsters!" and "I Wanna Be A Truck Driver When I Grow Up!"

They're about depression!!! \m/

[nonoor]

YAY!
Watch out for my next singles, "Happy Crunchy Monsters!" and "I Wanna Be A Truck Driver When I Grow Up!"

They're about depression!!! \m/

w00t!

[bellamy'szetagirl]

I
I am
I am not
I am not your
I am not your dream
I am not your dream anymore
I am not your dream anymore since
I am not your dream anymore since you
I am not your dream anymore since you are
I am not your dream anymore since you are not
I am not your dream anymore since you are not my
I am not your dream anymore since you are not my pillow

[Kristy*SweetS]

The bird that travels oh so free, wants to be with a turtle like me.
This bird has a mind oh so sweet, but wants to spoil it, with a turtle like me.
This bird has wings as long as you can see, but wants to cut them off to be with a turtle like me.
This bird can live high in a tree, but wants to come down to stay with a turtle like me.
This bird can fly so far away, but for some reason, it decides to stay

With a turtle like me.

I know nothing about poetry, it was just a freestyle moment. :rolleyes:

[Tokamak]

life has to be a bottle of cola,
shake it up and throw it against a wall
it has to be so much more interesting
then imbibing it sip by sip

[naget4music]

I can't take this shit much more
The pain is stuffing up my life
But due to my recent actions
I've landed my self in strife

rather emo don't you think

[New Born Lee]

Pages, look, and books behold!
I stay sleek while you grow old!
Paint me yellow so I can feel,
Your humiliating peel.
Bright I am, though I think,
I should be true, and respect your ink.
Without the spine of my good chums,
Where would all my knowledge come?

We're different yet we stay at one,
We pull their faces, faces come!
Same as they read, they lean and lean,
They push toward the computer screen.

[nonoor]

Endless.

The horizon,
the stars,
the tunnels,
the cars.

The stairs,
the land,
the ground,
and the sand.

[cakedcolors]

Time,
Stretches
Hours of you lost.
Memories,
Blurring at the edges.

Time,
Stretches
As I wait
For our next meeting.
For now,
I take in the lies
And know that you miss me.

Time,
Stretches
As I allow it to fall
As sand, through
My parted fingertips,
Seperated from the buried seed
Of love.

[WutDaFucksy]

This is a poem about my exam,
It may as well just be spam,
It was really long and really boring,
It almost ended with me snoring.

[New Born Lee]

Her hair hardly ever blows.
Eyes always open half.
She gazes forward, solely forward.

The grey pavement she walks on
Never makes a sound.
Masked by all the other noises.

Please, monotony, please.
Carry yourself away.
Go and plague some other dreamer.

So her hair will break loose.
I'll startle her.
And she'll look at me and speak.

[Mr Dink]

The jarred glimpses of collective fragments
Splintered into a convulted view
Memories shattered and twisted into
A future brought about to forget you

Deriving the language from hurt and pain
And the crimson lines decorated onto
The life meant to be bitterly slain
Imagery that balances too soon

Prodded into fissured gloom
Shoveled through the ashes of sorrow
I'm crying now to get rid of
The thought of a better tomorrow

Lower my values onto the stretcher
I promised that I'd be yours forever
Making the right choice? It's now or never
The thought of happiness I can't remember

[Finlay]

Off the top of my head right now!:

synchronized souls separated into groups
i, for one, am not looked upon
my true identity has been dissolved
in the spring sparkling light, of one famous love.
i know it dosen't rhyymhyme

[Tokamak]

And so the heart was broken
No longer fixed and focused
But spread and fragmented
No longer devoted
Pick up the splinters from the dust
Hand them out, never ask hem back.

[cakedcolors]

You told me I was dying,
My eighteen years burning out
Quicker than you can remember.
I had passed over a ledge
And was merely waiting
For the crashing end.

Routing back to my conciousness
You crafted a ledge
Mapped by caresses and compliments,
Dinners and first times.
I keep blinking it away,
Pretending such a ledge
Doesn't exist,
Cannot exist.

In my denial, I remember
It was I who took the first steps
Now you merely grip my hand
In our creation.

I know soon
My waist will turn
And I will fall.
It will be beautiful.

[ninja]

Softly comes whispering footsteps,
They come with mystery and intent,
You gaze, your room, so tidily kept,
With things, so clean, not a bit bent.

Walk to the window, come closer,
Look outside to a world of wonder,
Out of cafes, come the smokers,
You gaze outside, begin to ponder.

This world, so dark, so cold, so cruel,
Factories harming peoples' lungs,
Do you remember days by the pool?
In the countryside you were so young.

But now the world is old and tired,
Materials used, not replaced,
You look and think, the world has expired,
People around, sick and redfaced.

What will become of us?

[Megglen]

A Prima is a juicy fun,
Always there after the run,
Never it seems to get off it's butt,
But still it is awesome as a mutt.

:wtf: did I just write?

[New Born Lee]

Romance is boring, apparently.
Why then is it killing me?
Yeats is quick to bore me
As he yearns for old MG.
On the net there's stories,
So paper thin they're not on paper.
Handsome people come along,
And bite the end of your wafer.
Story lovers only quarrel,
When Cupid fires an arrow.
When reading eyes fall on a kiss,
We skip a page for battlemage.
Romance is boring, so they say.
So why doesn't she just go away?

[Finlay]

Everything's turning into shit
Shit is turning into everything
So why is everything shit?
Because shit is turning into everything

:happy:

[Crayola]

I'm a mongrel, I'm a haflwit just like everyone I know
In my lungs the Carribean, in my voice the rain and snow
In my heart my aba matré, in my body alus gro
'Cus I'm a mongrel, I'm a haflwit just like everyone I know

From the Coast of Matta Cairo to the Coast of Aberdeen
From the boiling sands of Tsulia to the frozen River Dean
All your borders and your colours do not mean a thing to me
I'm a mongrel, I'm a haflwit just like everyone I see

[New Born Lee]

Everything's turning into shit
Shit is turning into everything
So why is everything shit?
Because shit is turning into everything

:happy:

That made me lol!
Another future Slipknot lyricist.

[Finlay]

That made me lol!
Another future Slipknot lyricist.

I hate Slipknot's lyrics

[Valentin_Selezynov]

Scientology
Takes a lot from me
Financialy

Scientology
Gives a lot to me
In spirituality

Scientology
Makes me me
It's a part of me

Scientology
Completes me
Whole-heartedly

[Ullalume]

That sounds like some cheesy song Valentin..But it is quite good!

[Valentin_Selezynov]

Thanks.
I once put it to the music from unchained melody. It fits quite well. I'm probably going to incorporate it into my space ballet.

[bellamy'szetagirl]

As the memory of your light fades
My days go dark.

My nights are lit with electric bulbs
I can not sleep.
I am afraid of dark.
I am afraid that you will never return.
I am afraid that my next thought will be of you.
I am afraid that I will run out of poems
Before I run out of pain.

[miss snicket]

Simple, I know
But seriously, just go
I suppose you, can't see
This dark side, of me

I'd run now, if I were you
Its the first thing, you should do
If you want, to see
The end of, history

[Carrotie]

White glossy paint is soon turned much darker
by messages left in permanent marker
Like someone who tags wherever they're able
Or meaningful couplets all over the table

Haha makes no sense

[miss snicket]

^Hehe, I like the first two lines :D

hmm...
When really quite bored, one should not cry
And more often than not, it helps not to die
You see its a fact
Yes, my brain is intact
That one should eat a slice of pie!

[emilya]

out out damn spot!
why wear a white top
when out on the town
and there's beer going down?

[The_Tourist]

My hands are as
Quick as my feet
When it comes to running
And touching you.

LOL

[ninja]

love, is a complicated word,
overused, and underestimated.
love, is like a flying turd,
it comes unexpected, and hits you in the face.

and then,
you're in deep shit.

:chuckle

[Speedster]

love, is a complicated word,
overused, and underestimated.
love, is like a flying turd,
it comes unexpected, and hits you in the face.

and then,
you're in deep shit.

:chuckle

you miss sair, is a true poet :LOL:

[Caro]

If I could lie here
For a thousand days
Would it matter?
If I could save the world
In a thousand ways
Would it matter?

To stare at the sky
And know you really feel
Like nothing
Is to realise that
Every person you'll meet
Is nothing.

If I could sing to you
A thousand songs
Would it matter?
If I would laugh in the face
Of your every wrong
Would I matter?

[WeepingWillow]

Hello all I'm spectacularly new
Part of me wishes this site was more blue
I listen to Muse as I sit in my shoes
.... Yep, I'm done.

[cakedcolors]

I envision a cobblestoned alleyway
On the way to meeting you again.
Narrow and direct, I wait
To begin an easy journey
Back to your arms.

[Flynn]

a girl went down on me once
there was peace

[cakedcolors]

a girl went down on me once
there was peace

Just once?
Jk, jk.

(I think what I mean to say is, I hope you acheive peace more than one brief moment. I was once told that every time you go down on a guy, God makes five rainbows, and one hundred people see each of those rainbows, so you make five hundred people's days, five hundred people happy.)

[Flynn]

Just once?
Jk, jk.

(I think what I mean to say is, I hope you acheive peace more than one brief moment. I was once told that every time you go down on a guy, God makes five rainbows, and one hundred people see each of those rainbows, so you make five hundred people's days, five hundred people happy.)

yes....

[ninja]

:LOL:

oof, i walked into a wall,
damnit i made myself fall,
oof, i bump into you,
its so embarrassing being in my shoes.
Eek, i walked into a tree,
i wish nature would let me be,
ah, i bump into you again,
i think i've found myself a friend

[ninja]

i walked up to you,
admired you so,
i felt like my brain was in my shoe,
i adore you so,
tried to come up with words,
to tell how i felt,
only came up with stuff you'd already heard,
you don't know how embarrased i felt.
I go to see you this afternoon,
You tell me you need me,
you shine in my heart just like the moon,
oh, you don't know how i feel.

[SaveTheHostages!]

my body is not quite natural-a
its is shaped like a brand new spatula
My face is as gold as a crown
but my shins are crazily brown
people laugh at me-nis
because i lost my penis
people are extroardinarily mean
I CALL SHOTGUN!
my mum says
"hell no gold face"
My dad says
"hell no spatula boy"
My girlfriend cries
"WHY DONT YOU HAVE A PENIS"

[ryanbmuff]

violets are red
roses are blue
i sucked off
my dog ol' bloo

[New Born Lee]

Trickling coldness,
Little waterfall.
Filling me up inside.

Seeing faces,
An unreachable love.
On the other side.

Self-forbidden sight,
Into dark reality.
The love to one confide.

Future pressure,
Wrecks summer bliss.
Filling me up inside.

[nonoor]

After the laces are united,
I commence the journey unwillingly,
and then my eyes look to the sky,
it's so dark and I smile.

As I wait for my sweat to break,
like going to bed and to awake,
the normal scorch is lacking,
again I smile.

[mint]

I live a lie
'Cos I know I'm gona die
Oh well
Some more pie?

[Chizzleface]

We never had a chance in this,
it seems our love is gone.
Who knew that we would never last;
we've been doomed all along.

I once had cherished our love,
And now I miss it so...
I didn't think we'd end this way,
just wish you didn't go.

In time I know I'll feel the pain
of being all alone;
and in the chair I know I'll sit
-- I'll wait for you to phone.

I know that it will never ring
-- aware it is no use.
I know that even knowing that,
I still will wait for you.

I know I cannot bring you back;
I never will succeed.
There is no word in all the world
that would make you love me.

And I'll look in the mirror
knowing that I am to blame.
I never will forgive myself;
life will not be the same.

Your face is still etched in my head;
I'm scared to let it go
-- Cause if I let you slip away
I will be on my own.

(I don't know how to live
without your tenderness and care.
And even if I wish for you,
I know you won't appear.)

It seems like it's a nightmare,
even though it's clearly real;
and even though our love is dead
I cannot stop the way I feel.

I wish that you could hear me
-- hear me crying late at night;
I wish that you would read this,
wish you'd see the things I write.

I know I'm just a memory,
a pigment in your head.
To you we are not anything
-- all passion has been dead.

No matter how I wish it false,
I know that it is true;
It's dead; I must accept the fact:
I Never Will Have You.

And somehow deep within my heart,
I'll hold onto you still.
I wish I could forget you,
-- but I know I never will.

[New Born Lee]

We never had a chance in this,
it seems our love is gone.
Who knew that we would never last;
we've been doomed all along.

I once had cherished our love,
And now I miss it so...
I didn't think we'd end this way,
just wish you didn't go.

In time I know I'll feel the pain
of being all alone;
and in the chair I know I'll sit
-- I'll wait for you to phone.

I know that it will never ring
-- aware it is no use.
I know that even knowing that,
I still will wait for you.

I know I cannot bring you back;
I never will succeed.
There is no word in all the world
that would make you love me.

And I'll look in the mirror
knowing that I am to blame.
I never will forgive myself;
life will not be the same.

Your face is still etched in my head;
I'm scared to let it go
-- Cause if I let you slip away
I will be on my own.

(I don't know how to live
without your tenderness and care.
And even if I wish for you,
I know you won't appear.)

It seems like it's a nightmare,
even though it's clearly real;
and even though our love is dead
I cannot stop the way I feel.

I wish that you could hear me
-- hear me crying late at night;
I wish that you would read this,
wish you'd see the things I write.

I know I'm just a memory,
a pigment in your head.
To you we are not anything
-- all passion has been dead.

No matter how I wish it false,
I know that it is true;
It's dead; I must accept the fact:
I Never Will Have You.

And somehow deep within my heart,
I'll hold onto you still.
I wish I could forget you,
-- but I know I never will.

I'm playing a miniature violin, just for you.

Hey wait, that's not a violin THAT'S MY WRIST ARGHARGAHARGHARGH!

[ChrisirhC]

There once was a man from drumkin
Who had to live in a bin
Some noobs came beside it
and dropped a banger inside it
and now the man is dead

[New Born Lee]

There once was a man from drumkin
Who had to live in a bin
Some noobs came beside it
and dropped a banger inside it
and now the man is dead

:LOL: black humour ftw!

[New Born Lee]

Painting our faces with colours,
Or making eyes appear larger,
Only improves in the mind's eye.
Washing clean our apparel,
Can't give the same vibrancy,
As drawings on screens or paper.
Always trying to improve,
Based on what we make and see.
We can be two-dimensional,
But we cannot be 2D.

Skin can't match such flat colour,
Human veins are inkblots,
On our organic existence.
Skeletons built on bumps and grooves,
Cannot match our drawn curves,
Our dextrous hands are magic wands.
Arts are dreams and envious lands,
We want our make-believe.
We can be two-dimensional,
But we cannot be 2D.

[ninja]

We've come so far,
Or moved but an inch.
We give away our hearts,
With nothing but a flinch.

Still haven't learnt,
To shield myself away.
I'll keep getting burnt,
Just to keep the dogs at bay.

No, I haven't come a way, not at all,
I am but at the beginning of this rat-race.
Now I think I am going to fall,
All this, just to fall on my face...

Again.

[New Born Lee]

We've come so far,
Or moved but an inch.
We give away our hearts,
With nothing but a flinch.

Still haven't learnt,
To shield myself away.
I'll keep getting burnt,
Just to keep the dogs at bay.

No, I haven't come a way, not at all,
I am but at the beginning of this rat-race.
Now I think I am going to fall,
All this, just to fall on my face...

Again.

Sorry but some of this reminds me of In The End by Linkin Park. :LOL:
And the again just screams Hoodoo.

Otherwise I like it though. :)

[mint]

There once was a man from drumkin
Who had to live in a bin
Some noobs came beside it
and dropped a banger inside it
and now the man is dead

I don't know what rhyming scheme that is.

[ninja]

You stand there,
alone like a silhouette.
You rub salt in the wounds,
just to make the pain set.
In your eyes,
there are no alibies.
You don't want the pain,
you need it, no need to explain.
Your face full of darkness and misery,
You are in no hurry.
You take the blade,
and slice, slice.
You smile as the pain confirms you are real,
your smile reflects the hurt you make me feel.

[ninja]

Sorry but some of this reminds me of In The End by Linkin Park. :LOL:
And the again just screams Hoodoo.

Otherwise I like it though. :)

well if it helps
i've never paid attention to either hoodoo or in the end.

[Vesper]

I should really do this more often...


Dont let me rain on your parade
but my indifference is too great to hide
I've stopped caring
I've stopped sharing
I've stopped wondering what you would think
Im done with this charade.

[Liam]

The Adventure

An adventure is a trip
And to trip is to fall

You fall when you're in love
'Cus love can conquer all

The adventure of your heart
Will give heart to others

Because it's others who will
And it's others who won't

Because it's others who take
And it's others who give

The adventure is yours
And the falling will toll

It will conquer your mind
And your heart and your soul

I tell you this, as lasting advice
It'll be bloody worth it.

[ninja]

Rose petals fall slowly on the water,
Pippling and distorting your facial features.
They break you apart,
and hide your scars,
they make you beautiful.
The night is young and hurtful,
souls will be burnt,
Tonight.

Doesn't really rhyme, but they're lyrics to a song i wrote just then.
They sound quite sweet to a 'haunting' melody :)

[Tits McGee]

Ever since I met you
I couldn't stop thinking of you
You were in my dreams
You saved me in my nightmares
When I fapped, I thought of you
And I still have no idea why there are ants in my poo.
I want to pluck your eyebrows
And put it in your soup
Maybe I could add a little
Of that delicious piece of poop.

FUCK YEAH

[followthewhiterabbit]

yesterday whilst waiting for my class. i was bored so i wrote this piece in about 10minutes.

inside the nebula

burn. she will fall.
turn. crash and call.
the fading starlight feeds us all.
she screams to forget.
but we won't regret.
what befalls, is the stardust left below.
up, inside the galaxy a name shines across the sky
but only for tonight.

(and that's about how far i got)

[ninja]

Throw my heart and soul to the stars,
watch them burn like comets,
racing through the night sky.

doesnt rhyme, but i like it

[Nimpo46]

Here is a quick poem I wrote about finding yourself in nature:


there's part of me you'll never know
the only thing I'll never show

hopelessly I'll love you endlessly
hopelessly I'll give you everything
but I won't give you up
I won't let you down
and I won't leave you falling
If the moment ever comes

It's plain to see it's trying to speak
cherished dreams forever asleep

hopelessly I'll love you endlessly
hopelessly I'll give you everything
but I won't give you up
I won't let you down
and I won't leave you falling
if the moment ever comes

hopelessly I'll love you endlessly
hopelessly I'll give you everything
but I won't give you up
I won't let you down
and I won't leave you falling
but the moment never comes

[ninja]

I regret who I am,
I regret who I've been,
I regret what I've done,
I regret what I've seen.

[Fernando]

I see the end
and the sea I
running its shores
sure its running
to the end
and the two
choices have we
we have choices?

[Adrianna]

Nothing too fancy,
No great long words,
Simple little ditty,
For the sexy musers.

I am a poet,
I'll bet you didn't know,
Published in print,
No money made though.

So here is my piece,
Plain for you to see,
I hope you enjoy,
Reading poetry from me.

[Nimpo46]

Give me a rose,
Give me a hose,
I'll put the rose on the hose,
And we'll pray that there's no god,
To punish us and make a fuss!

[Static Shadows]

Give me a rose and i'll set it on fire
It's shrivelling body forming a loveless pyre,
But give me an owl and you'll not see a scowl
And only our love soaring higher.

:happy:

[Knightofcydonia]

Skibidee dee, skibidee doo
I made this up, that's why it's poo

[New Born Lee]

Bloodplay

Steam issues from our skins,
Collapsing as one, drenched in blood,
Bodies wrestled, fought and clashed,
Then the moment; I reached the spot.

Screams mixing up with silence,
Bodies blessed with lines and cuts,
As walls were breached, I saw red,
Then the moment; my hands are blot.

I carried you, us both gasping,
Hidden there until next we roam,
I, a warrior, can truly hear,
'Tween clashing swords,a soft, sweet moan.

The day holds a battle, and then our night is made.
Now touch my lips and kiss my blade.

[Nimpo46]

One afternoon,
I was sitting drinking my wine,
And I thought, my, this is fine,
So I opened the door,
And layed on the floor,
Come waste your millions here,
Secretly she said,
And we'll pray that there's no god,
To punish us and make a fuss!

[Strawberry_Juice]

Two days ago, I went to see
A doc of gynecology.
When I walked in, she said to me,
"My dear, you're going to have to pee."
And so to pee I went with glee,
For on the doc you mustn't wee.

[The_Tourist]

My hand in your pocket
Your eye in my socket
My photo in your locket
Your body in a coffin.

[Nimpo46]

One night in Spain

Have you ever wondered,
What that drink was like,
Cloudy water,
Potential pain?
Have you ever wondered,
What would have happened,
If you'd had a sip,
One night in Spain?

I'd like to dedicate that poem to Ryanbmuff and New Born Lee.

[ninja]

Give me a rose and i'll set it on fire
It's shrivelling body forming a loveless pyre,
But give me an owl and you'll not see a scowl
And only our love soaring higher.

:happy:

:happy:
awww

[QueenOfNerds]

Torn between two who do not want me,
heart at unrest dark and lonely.
I look to stars to remove me,
begging please replace me,
for one you can decieve,
for skin that deserves to breath.

[ninja]

I caught you staring,
you know I did,
At the clothes I was wearing,
Yeah, I looked like a kid.

You came towards me,
Suddenly, the room was small,
You were all I could see,
My heart was being pounded like a squash ball.

[QueenOfNerds]

I caught you staring,
you know I did,
At the clothes I was wearing,
Yeah, I looked like a kid.

You came towards me,
Suddenly, the room was small,
You were all I could see,
My heart was being pounded like a squash ball.

I really like that one!

[New Born Lee]

Life's a hell,
Things just got worse,
You pick up a pen,
And can't find the verse.

[ninja]

You had my heart,
there in your palm,
You tore it apart,
You played me for fun.

You told me you loved me,
I believed you of course.
I followed you blindly,
You were my gravitational force.

So, you love more than one?
You could have just left.
Oh, Did I ruin your fun?
Time for you to deal with your theft.

I'll find you,
yes I will,
And I'll Bind you,
against your will.

I'll make you see,
What you were to me.
And then,
rip out your heart,

As you did to mine.

[QueenOfNerds]

Unaware that you are killing me,
your eyes still blue, soul still bright,
my fantasy won't let me be,
my life on hold, no will to fight.
I see signs in silent dark,
hear voices when there's no one there,
hear love in your every remark,
confirm my bias, say you care.

[New Born Lee]

Funny little fingers,
Reaching for a pen.

Funny little fingers,
holding down the nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn....

[QueenOfNerds]

Soft lips of emptyness,
my hands reach out for air.
fingers caress nothingness,
and don't run through your hair.
Warm skin touched with cold,
vacum hands of black,
our eyes don't meet, stop and hold,
no kisses down my back.

[Knightofcydonia]

Count out to twenty
subtract by ten
multiply by factor 4
and start all over again

[Ritos Faar]

The Construction Worker's Lament

Lord, I know I've been a schmuck,
I've lied and messed 'round with your head;
But if you'd listened when I said duck,
Then maybe you would not be dead.

R.I.P. Barry

[Olly.]

It drew it from the light,
The final image of a fallen dream,
Blurred and distorted from the anguish and fright,
It haunted the souless and demented.

[New Born Lee]

Stabbing straps,
Scribbled ink,
Caged birds,
Forced to speak.

Wistful looks,
The desk in front,
Scribbled page,
Not looking up.

Lashing rain,
All face-down.
Outside again,
School is done.

[QueenOfNerds]

To my phantom goodbye,
and to his friends goodnight.
I'm relesed with a sigh,
and have taken to flight.
I am more than you know,
you were never my friend,
so now I must go,
for you it's the end.

[ninja]

shoes and socks,
little mice and clocks,
those little things,
like those plastic rings.

sunshine,
on a rainy day,
feelin' fine,
that's all i have to say

[Carla]

amidst the chaos of tragedy
stood a man
with innumerable cuts
blood running down his face
an anomaly in the crowd
for his face was not decorated with anxiety
nor fear
nor confusion
but with a smile
happy to be alive


(true story)

[Ritos Faar]

With a whoop and a cry, he dashed out to prance;
At the end of TIRO he shuffled ye dance.
The outro was goode, pulling faces of sexe,
Then he trashed his guitar - whatever nexte?

No prizes for guessing the subject, but you get a cookie if you can tell me the meter.

[New Born Lee]

With a whoop and a cry, he dashed out to prance;
At the end of TIRO he shuffled ye dance.
The outro was goode, pulling faces of sexe,
Then he trashed his guitar - whatever nexte?

No prizes for guessing the subject, but you get a cookie if you can tell me the meter.

It looks like Iambic Pentameter...
And it seems you've read a bit of Chaucer. :LOL:

[QueenOfNerds]

Say what you will, you're not setting me true,
when I've seen the things that are following you.
You tell me to stop, I'm already dead,
My feet have been taken and torn to a shred.
And ever the things I believed to be real,
things that were nothing, things I could feel.
covering corners in nothing I see,
and torchering me for not setting you free.

[Ammeeria]

I am not sure shoudl I start a new thread for poems and lyrics, but I guess this thread will do fine for now... I am a bit scared about starting a new thread. Haha, anyway. Here is a poem I wrote loong time ago...

I can wreak damage.
Just by pulling the right sticks.
The right people.
I can make such a great damage.

I can produce fear.
I can cause it,
And I can control it.
I can make it outrageous,
Hideous,
Breath-taking.
However you want it.
I can do it.

I can crush people down.
I can break their necks,
Without thinking about you.
I can burn cities just to make sure.
Nothing's for real.

I can be heel.
I guess I am that.
Unhealthy.
A heap of bones.
Patch of flesh.
All that pulp put together.
Just to make human what it is.
Only a human.

I hope you like it.

[Eye of Harmony]

disgruntled
befuddled
by the hypocrisy in my mind
it gnaws through the ropes
only to tie them back up again
only to apologize for the damage
then smirk sardonically
and shred them apart
I constrain myself
only to be free again

[QueenOfNerds]

The many dangers of astronomy,
have only just become known to me.
Don't go to dark woods with a guy off the net,
who posts on popastro but you've never met.
Lines the back of his car with black plastic bags,
knows nothing of stars and astronomy gags,
Thinks that M31 is a motorway,
when asked astro stuff can't think what to say.
A sociopath in a big black car,
who pointed at jupiter thinking it was a star.
So I warn all astronomers, beware!
before going to dark places know who's taking you there.

This actually happened to me and my boyfriend once,
I think we avoided murder!

[airstation86]

chisolm interrogation speculates her revival
despite the heliotrope pentacle
memory turned off due to symetry domes
ameliorate in flag driven garden tones

...well i try ><

[Tokamak]

If it's mind of matter and mind over time,
then surely time must matter?

[Tokamak]

Dow Jones
Dow drops
Drying in
The Rising
Eastern Sun

[Strawberry_Juice]

It looks like Iambic Pentameter...
And it seems you've read a bit of Chaucer. :LOL:
Nah, more like anapaestic tetrameter, though it's not purely anapaestic...

[New Born Lee]

Nah, more like anapaestic tetrameter, though it's not purely anapaestic...

The one I said is the only one of these 'meters' I know. :LOL:

[Eye of Harmony]

twisted and gnarled tree
reflection from my mind's eye
gripped in delusion

[QueenOfNerds]

I listen to songs of passion and fire,
you don't know my lust, don't know my desire.
sitting in darkness, sucking in light,
waiting for you, my lord of the night.

[ninja]

not specifically off my head.
But I wrote a song yesterday thatI'm pretty proud of...

I can see it sometimes like a distant star,
Looks like you can touch it, but it's so far away.
We run to catch it, in our arms,
It leads us blindly, burns us up so fast.

Hoping,
Dreaming for a miracle, mmmm,
Chasing cars and tails like a dog.
Find us, help us, bring us, home.

Will you come, to join us
To be blinded in our joy?
Joy for a, pot of gold, at the enf of a rainbow.
But you're wise, unlike us,
Didn't think so.

Hoping,
Dreaming for a miracle, mmmm,
Chasing cars and tails like a dog.
Find us, help us, bring us, home.
Find us, help us please, bring us, home.

[gunnerthekiwi]

What brought us together,
Can't keep us together,
For we've grown up,
And we've grown apart.
Is it foolish I cherish,
A feral desire,
To leave you a space in my heart?
Do you still remember,
Or is it just me?,
The nights we shared,
In un-adult sense,
Silent for fear they were listening.

[Carrotie]

When the wind blows
And the sky snows
The little boy
Likes his toy
He wanted to build a snowman
But his mother said no way man
So the little boy cried
And everybody died

I just owned you all :cool:

[gunnerthekiwi]

http://www.thevictorycompany.com/StandingOvation.jpg

[QueenOfNerds]

Clumps of matter, do we matter?
Well you matter, matter to me.
Distant star, to far to touch,
and if I could, you would just burn me.
Solidity just an illusion, compressed to fusion,
I burn with yearning.
Your matter's best, no way to test,
the way I feel, with zeal I'm learning.

[QueenOfNerds]

Can't cross my fingers,
to whom do I pray.
While I wait what can I do.
It's common as muck,
so why am I surprised?
why the shock and the worry?
can't touch wood,
to whom do I bow my head?
as I wait for the news,
what do I do.

[milkybar=]]

haikus are easy
but sometimes they dont make sense
refrigerator

[Flynn]

har har
i have a nob
a nob with a job
and that job is you

[New Born Lee]

har har
i have a nob
a nob with a job
and that job is you

Dip at your place?

Oh well you're both pretty horny.

[ninja]

take a walk,
with me,
let's talk,
you'll see.
I miss you,
You don't care.
I love you,
But I'm like thin air.

You smile,
I nod.
We Laugh,
At your job.
You miss me,
I don't care.
You love me,
But now you're just thin air.


-siiiigh-

[naget4music]

this is not mine... this is a friends.

I see a FISH
I see a CAT
I want to eat
A CHICKEN WRAP

hehehehhehehee

[ninja]

spinning and twisting,
falling with style.
laughing and smiling,
what a way to die

^^ im quite proud of that :erm:

[QueenOfNerds]

Zoids two?
Zoids two?
They colour them red instead of blue,
and then they call them zoids two.

Writen by my boyfriend!

[New Born Lee]

take a walk,
with me,
let's talk,
you'll see.
I miss you,
You don't care.
I love you,
But I'm like thin air.

You smile,
I nod.
We Laugh,
At your job.
You miss me,
I don't care.
You love me,
But now you're just thin air.


-siiiigh-

I liek it cos it's a bit random liek.

[New Born Lee]

Ode to a Happy Relationship

How you'll giggle, how you'll laugh,
to echo jokes as students pass,
At least he's not a psychopath,
You'll think, then growth and seeds at last.
How you'll giggle, how you'll laugh,
Later on, when nerve has passed,
We'll grow some more, confident until abashed,
When deeds are doing, rings passed.
How you'll giggle, how you'll laugh.
Before I pass, will I hear at last,
How you giggle, how you laugh?

I'm annoyed that I couldn't give it quite the proper structure of a sonnet. :mad:

[ninja]

i wrote it off the top of my head to put on my dA:

At Sea:
Silent, mysterious, wonderful blue,
A huge expanse of a gorgeous hue.
Tiny ripples break across the surface,
As if, underneath, there is some great furnace.

It looks so dead, yet so alive,
It is so quiet, yet so full of life.

Small creatures, swim in the light,
While the bold and heatbroken wander in the night.
The depths of this sparkling, nauseating sight,
Are hardly seen, as what is down there will bite!

So here we sit, floating who knows where,
Insignificant against its majestic grandeur

[JackAndrews]

glistening in the starlight
are your lips so sweet id kiss.
but once again i say no word,
i sit, i stare, youre bliss.

[QueenOfNerds]

On the stairs do you see me?
In the night, where I live.
on the air do you follow me?

All a shiver when I see you,
skin alive with excitement.
On the stairs where I see you.

A bit shite but hey:p

[Rage Kitty]

Ok... here goes

Fold twice to recive
Luck unfathomable
The advert claimed in black and white
Forty pounds
Fortune told
Obvious answers
Make luck
Make it yourself
Out of tape and broken things
The best charms are your charms

[QueenOfNerds]

Ok... here goes

Fold twice to recive
Luck unfathomable
The advert claimed in black and white
Forty pounds
Fortune told
Obvious answers
Make luck
Make it yourself
Out of tape and broken things
The best charms are your charms

very cool, quite cryptic.

[gwezza]

Think of a bee
You are its knees
Can I come round tuesday please?

[ninja]

Think of a bee
You are its knees
Can I come round tuesday please?

:LOL:

love won,
soul lost,
my head feels like it weighs a tonne,
time to pack up, i feel crossed.

love lost,
soul won,
now i've been freed of the cost.
time to get dressed, have some fun.

yayyyy, :happy:

[Static Shadows]

There was a badger called fred,
Who had a rather large head.
He jumped in a hole
Where he met a fine mole,
Who said "you've sat on my wife, she's quite dead."

:happy:

[New Born Lee]

There was a badger called fred,
Who had a rather large head.
He jumped in a hole
Where he met a fine mole,
Who said "you've sat on my wife, she's quite dead."

:happy:

Aw dude, you didn't write that! :LOL: It's awesome!

[Static Shadows]

Aw dude, you didn't write that! :LOL: It's awesome!

Well I am doing my English Literature MA at Cardiff at the moment. :cool:

[New Born Lee]

Well I am doing my English Literature MA at Cardiff at the moment. :cool:

This proves it's all worth it. :cool:

[MuseAddict101]

And the clock tolls nine.
I tap my foot against the hard wood floor.
Utterly stuck and utterly alone.
The sound of the ticking reverberates against the walls.
It echoes until it is one loud note in my ears.
But then it becomes an undertone and I sit there.
Utterly stuck and utterly alone.
Looking down upon the blank sheet, I realize I will always be stuck.
The story is going nowhere.
Getting up to leave, the clock tolls ten.
I walk out the room, leaving the paper all alone with the lonesome ticking.

Haha, I think we can rule poetry out of my future. :p

[New Born Lee]

And the clock tolls nine.
I tap my foot against the hard wood floor.
Utterly stuck and utterly alone.
The sound of the ticking reverberates against the walls.
It echoes until it is one loud note in my ears.
But then it becomes an undertone and I sit there.
Utterly stuck and utterly alone.
Looking down upon the blank sheet, I realize I will always be stuck.
The story is going nowhere.
Getting up to leave, the clock tolls ten.
I walk out the room, leaving the paper all alone with the lonesome ticking.

Haha, I think we can rule poetry out of my future. :p

Hehe, its kinda just prose with liberal use of the enter key. :LOL: Nice vocab, just not much of a poem.

[Static Shadows]

There once was a man quite unsavory,
who kept his vicar in slavery.
With lecherous howls,
he'd bugger young owls,
that he kept in an underground avery.

[Rage Kitty]

There once was a man quite unsavory,
who kept his vicar in slavery.
With lecherous howls,
he'd bugger young owls,
that he kept in an underground avery.

Hehehe
Like that a lot
:happy:

[Caliandra]

Why not,
I'll give it a shot..

There was once a woman named Jannie
who liked to whip young men's fannies
she smacked them a lot
and when it was hot
she'd wave her fan at their mannies..

:facepalm:
:noey:

I'm sending that one to Shelby of Sound and Fury. They like dirty limericks lol

[ninja]

it's so sunny,
life, isn't funny,
want to kick a wall,
punch someone in the balls.
oh what a shit, is life.

[Flynn]

omnomnom
black keys came on

humtumtum
their bluesiness makes me cum

[ninja]

:stunned:

[MuseAddict101]

Hehe, its kinda just prose with liberal use of the enter key. :LOL: Nice vocab, just not much of a poem.

Haha! Like I said, I think we can rule poetry out of my future..

[New Born Lee]

Idealizations seem obscene,
Now that I have heard your truth.
Like cutting open a brand new tree,
To find out it has many rings.
What I wanted for the tree,
Is wrong and not quite right for me.
Or buying a puppy for Christmas time,
And you get tired of walking it.
The puppy needs a lot of work,
You love the puppy very much.
When O so perfect something seems,
On top of all life's problems teems.
But mine is no hound or elder yew.
Alas, my little problem's you.

[lensip max]

Love and me, we just don't mix
And trust is away without leave
And Life is the guy who creeps up behind you,
Just when you think that you're free

Haha I don't have a poetic bone in my body. But that's me in a nutshell :p

[Caff]

I rattled this off in my little notebook in about five minutes earlier. It's the first time I've written something like this in ages but as usual I ignore most poetic conventions :LOL:

Remember, remember
When we were young
Oh remember we’d play beneath
The setting sun

And I’d warn against
All those risks you took
Until you fell as you
Skipped into the brook

Won’t you walk with me again?
Walk with me, take back
Those days
Walk with me again and
Tell me that you’re still safe.
Just walk with me again.

Oh come away, come
Away from there
HE isn’t the one who
Truly cares

So close to the edge
I could see you were scared
The wind carried that sigh
Your final breath

Won’t you walk with me again?
Can’t we share all the secrets
We used to share.
Walk with me again
It’s so cold now you’re gone
And it’s me, I’m scared.

Those autumn leaves
Lie undisturbed as I
Drag my boots beneath my skirts
So many golds and browns, the red
I’ll save as it is
Swept by the breeze
To a watery grave

Come back to me again.
I’m standing on the edge
Save me from this fate
A chasm that bears my name
Come back and
Walk with me again.

[QueenOfNerds]

I rattled this off in my little notebook in about five minutes earlier. It's the first time I've written something like this in ages but as usual I ignore most poetic conventions :LOL:

Remember, remember
When we were young
Oh remember we’d play beneath
The setting sun

And I’d warn against
All those risks you took
Until you fell as you
Skipped into the brook

Won’t you walk with me again?
Walk with me, take back
Those days
Walk with me again and
Tell me that you’re still safe.
Just walk with me again.

Oh come away, come
Away from there
HE isn’t the one who
Truly cares

So close to the edge
I could see you were scared
The wind carried that sigh
Your final breath

Won’t you walk with me again?
Can’t we share all the secrets
We used to share.
Walk with me again
It’s so cold now you’re gone
And it’s me, I’m scared.

Those autumn leaves
Lie undisturbed as I
Drag my boots beneath my skirts
So many golds and browns, the red
I’ll save as it is
Swept by the breeze
To a watery grave

Come back to me again.
I’m standing on the edge
Save me from this fate
A chasm that bears my name
Come back and
Walk with me again.



Ahh that is really sweet.

[Caff]

Ahh that is really sweet.

Thanks, it's not really based on anything that happened to me. I just like telling stories.

[WutDaFucksy]

Oh the good old Muse board
Always controversial
And it's better than TV
As there's no commercials

:p

[QueenOfNerds]

You let go and I'll let go,
Did you hear? loosen your grip.
You are not aware, I know,
if you release me I will slip.

Let me fall now, and I'll let you fall.


Really short, but feeling emotional today, this place is like therapy!

[Popelady]

My elbow is pretty
My elbow is cool
My elbow got hurt when I fell in the pool.
My elbow is awesome
My elbow is fun
My elbow got burned in the hot, hot sun.
:D (Please try to remember this was just off the top of my head. Yes, I know it's genius.:rolleyes:)

[ninja]

time spent,
well wasted,
in your arms,
they're my haven.

you're gone,
disappeared,
only the memories,
can i feel.

please return,
i miss you
I'll never learn
to let go.


:(

[lensip max]

Sometimes,
Standing in the sunlight
Is all you can do

And crossing your heart
Placing your hands on each shoulder
And breathing deep

Is the only way to keep the world turning

Hold on for tomorrow, honey
And the sun will slip back into your soul

-- I promise --


Gurh. I need to stop procrastinating. What a Freudian, (and ludicrously vainglorious) slip I make when I write down the first thing in my brain. Ah well. All's fair on uh, the Museboard...

(i.e. I'm slightly psycho and a bit worried about a friend of mine and yeah)

[QueenOfNerds]

Sometimes,
Standing in the sunlight
Is all you can do

And crossing your heart
Placing your hands on each shoulder
And breathing deep

Is the only way to keep the world turning

Hold on for tomorrow, honey
And the sun will slip back into your soul

-- I promise --


Gurh. I need to stop procrastinating. What a Freudian, (and ludicrously vainglorious) slip I make when I write down the first thing in my brain. Ah well. All's fair on uh, the Museboard...

(i.e. I'm slightly psycho and a bit worried about a friend of mine and yeah)

This actually brought a little tear to my eye:$
Really nice sentiment.